Kon recently informed me that the archive of my old unfinished BZPower story, Dusk and Dawn, had reappeared somehow. He advised that I repost it here to keep it saved, which makes sense since it ties into BZPB in a way (mainly for both D-Klak and DM Helryx). That said, it was written in either 2008 or 2009 (almost a decade ago), so if there's anything cringe-worthy in here, blame my younger self.
The story takes place some time after the events of Dark Mirror, in that same dimension.
Introduction:
Ancient paced left and right, waiting for The Recorder to arrive to the room. He stopped and looked over the silver balcony, staring at the crystalline-silver city skyline that stared back at him.
The Recorder arrived, and sat down on the floor of the balcony, taking in the fresh air. He quickly took out a notepad, and his strange writing device.
Ancient spoke, saying, "Write down what just happened, and write down everything that I dictate. Everyone forgot what happened, the Order made sure of it. Of course, I remember everything, and I want all to know what really made us come here."
The Recorder began to write:
(10 years earlier, 10 minutes after Dark Mirror ended):
The war......it was over. Turaga Dume stood beside Lesovikk, Toa Pohatu, and Makuta Teridax over the ravaged Coliseum. Hundreds of dead Toa, Matoran, Makuta, and many other creatures were scattered across the center. Other exhausted figures, perhaps on either side, stood, delirious. Very few of them actually continued to fight. Many of the Imperial Guards had either surrendered, died, or ran to the Hall of Masks after hearing the muffled bellows of empress-Toa Tuyet. Many of them came out, shocked, after seeing half of Tuyet floating in space. They had no idea that the other crushed part of her body was in-between universes.
Lesovikk yelled out, "Stop the fighting! Tuyet is dead!" (earlier he had heard her cries, and flew to the source, seeing the portal close. Most likely he knew Takanuva had left to another part of the universe), "A new age will dawn! The Toa Empire ends now!"
Thousands of Matoran, Vortixx, Skakdi, Dark Hunters, and even some Toa began to cheer. The few loyalists to the now crumbled empire had surrendered, and where now ready for any sentence. Before anyone could act, however, Turaga Dume announced that the leaders of the rebellion and of the Empire would meet to discuss the future of their world. Makuta Teridax summoned Krika to come with him.
The meeting would begin soon, raising the question: What will happen to the empire? Who will rule? This is the story of the pocket dimension that was mysteriously left behind. The true story.
The story takes place some time after the events of Dark Mirror, in that same dimension.
Introduction:
Ancient paced left and right, waiting for The Recorder to arrive to the room. He stopped and looked over the silver balcony, staring at the crystalline-silver city skyline that stared back at him.
The Recorder arrived, and sat down on the floor of the balcony, taking in the fresh air. He quickly took out a notepad, and his strange writing device.
Ancient spoke, saying, "Write down what just happened, and write down everything that I dictate. Everyone forgot what happened, the Order made sure of it. Of course, I remember everything, and I want all to know what really made us come here."
The Recorder began to write:
(10 years earlier, 10 minutes after Dark Mirror ended):
The war......it was over. Turaga Dume stood beside Lesovikk, Toa Pohatu, and Makuta Teridax over the ravaged Coliseum. Hundreds of dead Toa, Matoran, Makuta, and many other creatures were scattered across the center. Other exhausted figures, perhaps on either side, stood, delirious. Very few of them actually continued to fight. Many of the Imperial Guards had either surrendered, died, or ran to the Hall of Masks after hearing the muffled bellows of empress-Toa Tuyet. Many of them came out, shocked, after seeing half of Tuyet floating in space. They had no idea that the other crushed part of her body was in-between universes.
Lesovikk yelled out, "Stop the fighting! Tuyet is dead!" (earlier he had heard her cries, and flew to the source, seeing the portal close. Most likely he knew Takanuva had left to another part of the universe), "A new age will dawn! The Toa Empire ends now!"
Thousands of Matoran, Vortixx, Skakdi, Dark Hunters, and even some Toa began to cheer. The few loyalists to the now crumbled empire had surrendered, and where now ready for any sentence. Before anyone could act, however, Turaga Dume announced that the leaders of the rebellion and of the Empire would meet to discuss the future of their world. Makuta Teridax summoned Krika to come with him.
The meeting would begin soon, raising the question: What will happen to the empire? Who will rule? This is the story of the pocket dimension that was mysteriously left behind. The true story.
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