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    Gone Fishing

    Zev the Reveler
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    Gone Fishing

    Post by Zev the Reveler on Tue Jan 01, 2013 6:10 pm


    "Yes, master?"

    "Dame. I told you to call me Noodle."

    "If you say so, Master Noodle."

    "...That sounds like a high-quality brand of cheap American ramen. Just go back to calling me master."

    "If you say so, master."

    "I say so."


    "I was just thinking, it can be tough, being a girl whose fate to die has been narrowly diverted."

    "I can only imagine so, master. You just have to keep positive, and remember that your life has a special value, now."

    "I know. But it feels nice when you say it. Arigato gozaimasu."

    "You're welcome, master."

    "Mmh. Well I was just thinking...Something about fishing here, I don't really care if we catch anything."

    "No? You don't mind McDonald's again?"

    "Nah. It's just, being here beside the water, with you by my side, is very nice."

    "Well, it is nice to be here with you, master."

    "Is there anything you regret from your life? Anything you would have done differently?"


    "I am sorry if that was not okay to ask bakame I am sooo sorry - "

    "If I could go back to my life...I would have...Told my sister I loved her, more. My mother said that us two girls had to look out for each other. I should have let her know how much I always cared."



    "Oh. You caught something."

    "I'd rather let it go."

    "Okay. Hey Rider?"

    "Yes, master?"

    "I am so glad it was you."

    "...The same, Noodle."
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    Re: Gone Fishing

    Post by Klak on Wed Jan 02, 2013 9:10 am

    Nice dialogue, but what?


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