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    Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Tue Mar 08, 2011 9:51 am

    M'kay, first think you wanna know is about the countries that this RPG is set in.

    TRIKEN

    A large island country divided into two parts, both with their own
    individual terrain and wildlife.

    Part 1: FOREST

    The bottom part of the country is just called “Forest”, and is where
    people will start playing; it is home to the mysterious Vineman race. The
    town that people will be starting in is called Kenn, a town that contains
    many houses made of wood.

    Part 2: CAVE MOUNTAIN

    This part of Triken was named after the massive mountain that towers
    overall the other ones in this huge mountain range, so heavy that it has
    created a moat around itself. There are some rumours that there is an
    entrance to the cave within the mountain, where a beast sleeps…
    There are no towns or cities in CM.



    KERNA

    A country that is basically a massive city, the streets all keeping the
    same colour scheme of a pleasant grey-blue. This country has a higher
    amount of people than any other, and is still not very condensed with
    people. This country is home to the base of the Alliance.

    HIE

    Pronounced “hee”, this is a very dangerous country that is basically a
    large complex of land bridges made of mountain ranges; it contains the
    largest concentration of dragons on the planet.

    NHARVARDA

    The legendary home to the “Mole people”, and is probably the most
    dangerous place on the planet. Home to all sorts of nasty things; it is
    full of deserts and sand dunes.

    ???

    Anywhere outside these countries is to your imagination.



    The whole idea of this RPG is that you can fill these places with your
    cool ideas for quests and dilemmas and stuff. The countries are sort of an
    assortment of sandboxes, only with a few sand castles made, but much room
    for you to make your own.

    HOW TO MAKE YO’ MAIN CHARACTER
    Well, it’s quite simple, and quite non-simple; the simple stuff is finding
    a name for your character and his/her appearance. The characters you can
    make will have to me human/semi human. Other than a humanI am allowing
    characters to be a harpie (NOT harpy, there’s a difference), or a
    beastman. (NOT a furry beastman, I’m just talking about ears and tail
    beastman) The tricky part is thinking of a back-story that explains the
    situation your character is suddenly in.

    The situation any character will be in when they enter this game is as
    follows:

    The character will wake up in a small hospital in the town of Kenn, the
    character is neutral, meaning he/she has not joined any armies/clans, and
    is free to do what they want.

    THE CLANS THAT ARE ALREADY MADE ARE:

    SOUL KNIGHTS

    A legion of knights protecting Triken that are constantly blessed by the
    sun guardian and are therefore very powerful, the only way a person can
    join is if they locate the base, which is rumoured to be deep in the
    mountains of north Triken.

    MOLE MEN

    A large clan of barbaric nomadic people who are located underground in
    Nharvarda. Not much is known about them, but it is thought that the
    guardian of pain, suffering, and the atmosphere sometimes blesses them.

    NHARVARDIAN RESISTANCE

    The opposing force to the mole men, these people sometimes trade with the
    Alliance, but usually spend time trying to destroy the mole men, but to no
    victory. They are often attacked and damaged by ruthless raids from the
    mole men.

    ALLIANCE

    A law following ancient clan, located at the farthest northeast of Kerna.
    These people have the horribly active duty of keeping Kerna safe, fighting
    against all the thieves, murderers and crime organisations that come
    unwelcome to the streets of Kerna.

    ????

    Whatever you can imagine, there are a few places that don’t even have
    clans yet, like the small islands between Triken and Nharvarda and Hie.
    And of course, anyone can just add on a country to the map.

    GUARDIANS

    These are not gods. These are merely upgraded people chosen by gods to do
    all the dirty work. Here are some that are known:

    Arimasu – The sun guardian, thinking of the Soul Knights as her
    “Children”. She is the youngest Guardian, a mere age of 23, she has a kind
    aura to her, and has stunningly radiant skin and hair, but no one has
    actually seen her properly. She is always behind the sun.

    Ma – The Guardian of pain, suffering, and keeping the atmosphere in
    place. If it were not for Ma, the planet would not be able to hold life,
    so people tend to put up for the fact that every unnecessary suffering is
    because of this cruel guardian.

    Archyura- Guardian of the sea, he is one of the few Guardians who
    doesn’t look like a human much. The only human part of him is his head,
    the rest being a crab upper-body, crab arms, and an octopus lower-body.
    Archyura is also the Guardian of challenge, and for this reason he is the
    Guardian that comes down to the planet the most, challenging random
    travellers to a battle.


    REMEMBER: You can change the story to your liking. (For example, I can
    just make a character conveniently point my main character to a hidden
    place, sorta like BZPB, in the way that you can just make a random
    character at any time, the wake-up-in-hospital rule only applies for MAIN
    CHARACTERS)


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Zev the Reveler on Tue Mar 08, 2011 11:45 am

    ...I wanna try!

    [~ MAIN CHARACTER ~]

    Name: Sieg Basicula
    ~
    Epithet: The Ruthless Serpent
    ~
    Race: Snake Beastman
    ~
    Appearance: Long, Messy Black Hair That Covers Left Eye; Cold Gray Eyes; Three Small, Vertical Scars Over Right Side Of Mouth; Very Long Tail With Gray-Brown Scales & Black Splotches On Uppermost Quarter; Similar Black Splotches On Upper Biceps, Shoulders, And Neck.
    ~
    Affiliation: The Lonely Serpents Gang; Just Started
    ~
    Weapons: Numerous Close Combat & Throwing Daggers; 4x Miniature Clubs; Several Pouches of Caltrops; Several Makeshift Smokebombs & Other Metsubushi (Vision-Obscuring Techniques)
    ~
    Backstory: Prior to awakening in that hopsital, near-totally paralyzed and injured, Sieg had nightmares. Nightmares of all manner of terrible, aberrant creatures...Nightmares of great wars, and plagues, and catacylms...But mostly, nightmares of being exiled and lost in a stifling, semi-volcanic cave, having to live by hunting rodents and gathering fungi from the everpresent volcanic vents. When he woke up, this filled him with a great rage...And then, not so long after he awoke, Sieg discovered that he was an exiled criminal who had been injured, and was going back into exile now that he had recovered. Needless to say, he was not pleased. He proceeded to grab a pair of daggers off of a nearby injured warrior's nightstand, and slew everyone between him and the nearest exit. Ever since, he's been trying to gather together allies - Partly to get his revenge once he finds out who ordered him exiled...And partly to fill his aching void of loneliness.
    ~
    Quote: "If you won't kneel before my wrath, then you'll certainly kneel after it."

    --- --- ---

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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Tue Mar 08, 2011 6:36 pm

    Thatwazzawesome!!

    ----
    [~MA CHARACTER~]

    Name: Yumi Hanota

    Race: Human

    Age: 22

    Appearance: A young woman with long blue hair, quite short, gold eyes, wears a grey shirt and a knee high skirt with what seems like poorly drawn prayers to the Sun Guardian all over it, written in a strange language.

    Affiliation: Completely neutral.

    Weapons: A shockingly sharp short-sword, stolen from the Soul Knights, so it contains magical power from the Sun Guardian.

    Backstory: Yumi, before her horrible incident with some treemen, was all around an independent girl, still not really caring whether she joined a clan or not. But one day she saw a Soul Knight use his amazing powers against a rouge treeman, and that showed her that she wanted to be a Soul Knight more than anything in the world.
    The "incident" previously mentioned, is when Yumi attempted to be like a soul knight and smite a load of treemen, she failed, and the treemen did horrible things with her. After waking up, she cried for a while and noticed everyone in the hospital apart from the patients were dead, she cared more about being a Soul Knight though, and began her misadventure to Cave Mountain.


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Guest on Tue Mar 08, 2011 7:44 pm


    Name: Kazuki Nobuzuki

    Race: Human

    Age: 20

    Appearance: A young man, with dark spiky hair. he has brown eyes, and is quite an average height. Wears a brown belted jacket, with a single shoulder pad on his left arm.

    Affiliation:neutral.

    Weapons:Hand crafted Longsword, and a bow.

    Backstory: Kazuki had only started out his journey of travelling the world, to gain skills from weapons masters. he was driven out of his kindgom by his ruthless brother, and could not hope to face him, as he was a Soul Knight. He was travelling through the forest near Kenn, when he Blacked out. He woke up with bandages, but huge bruises all over him. He suddenly saw a girl crying in the corner, in her bed.
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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Tue Mar 08, 2011 8:23 pm

    [ In the hospital in Kenn: ]

    *Yumi stops crying, and looks to Kazuki*

    Yumi: Is that... Soul Knight armour?

    *Yumi stands up, showing her over energetic nature*

    Yumi: Do... Do you think you can show me the base in Cave Mountain?


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Guest on Wed Mar 09, 2011 1:36 am

    Kazuki: Soul Knight? My father was one, he passed all his possessions to me. And the entrance to the Cave Mountain? My father took me there once. I think I still know the way.
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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:25 am

    [ In the hospital in Kenn: ]

    *Yumi wears an exited expression on her face as she takes Kazuki by the hand and skips next to him out of the Hospital*

    ...

    [ Outside the Hospital in Kenn: ]

    *Outside the hospital is a few houses and shops, surrounded by a massive dense forest*

    Yumi: *Giggles*

    *She pulls out her short-sword, and a beam of light from the sun immediately strikes into it, infusing it with power*

    Yumi: Recognize this? I borrowed it from a Soul Knight on night watch.

    *She fires a beam of energy at a nearby tree with the sword, making an impressive hole in the middle of it*

    *Yumi steps toward the forest, but then sprints back to Kazuki*

    Yumi: I think the Vinemen are still angry with me... T-They hurt me with vines and sticks...

    *A well built old man randomly bursts out of the forest*

    Old man: Hello, travelers!

    Yumi: Who the heck are you?

    Old man: You may know me as Old peculiar, my dear lady. I heard you needed an escort safely through the forest.

    Yumi: How would you know that? Have you been spying on me!?

    Old peculiar: Uhhh... I might have stumbled across your conversations now and again...

    *Yumi points her sword directly at Old peculiar's head*

    Yumi: Leave me alone!

    Old peculiar: But I can lead you through the forest!

    Yumi *Lowers her sword* ... You can?

    Old peculiar: Come, ye travelers!

    *Old peculiar wields a silver axe and runs headlong into the forest*

    Yumi: I reckon we should follow him...

    *Yumi skips after Old peculiar*







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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:30 am

    OOS: We really need a section of the Wiki reserved for this. So this takes place in the BZPB universe, but the RPG is set only on this planet, right? (Cause if not... *shakes fist*)

    Name: Tim Sirring

    Race: Human

    Age: 19

    Appearance: A young man with short brown hair, quite short, white skin, green eyes, wears a white shirt and a large belt.

    Affiliation: Neutral, but dislikes Mole Men.

    Weapons: A powerful short-sword which he found in a street in Kerna. It is gold and seems to glow with some kind of strange energy.

    Backstory: Tim grew up in Kerna, but ran away from home when he was 17. He found himself across the border to Nharvada one night and was attacked by a group of Mole Men. The next thing he knew, he woke up here. (In hospital).


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Guest on Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:32 am

    Kazuki: Wait! You don't know what that old man might do... *Voice trails off because they are too far away* Gah. *runs after them*

    You really have to be more careful. You could run into a lot of trouble by yourself, and this giddy old fool won't be able to help you.

    *gives the evils at old peculiar*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:51 am

    [ Triken forest: ]

    *Yumi stares at Kazuki, but then looses interest and looks around*

    Yumi: Where's all the fruit!?

    Old peculiar: *Looks back worriedly at Kazuki, and then back at Yumi* Not so loud, young lady...! The Vinemen thrive here.

    * Yumi falls silent, but still begins climbing the nearest tree, very quickly*

    Old peculiar: *Facepalm* Ugh... Why do I even try...?

    *Old peculiar walks on, Yumi jumping from tree to tree to catch up with him*

    Yumi: *Screams*

    *Yumi falls from the tree she was climbing on, and is seen hanging from a vine by her ankle*

    Yumi: Uh-oh...

    *A croaky voice can be heard all around*

    ???: Come back for more eh? Didn't the scars and bruises teach you a lesson?

    Old peculiar: Come out, and fight like men!

    ???: But we are not men...

    *Around half a dozen Vinemen approach from their hiding places in the bushes, and approach slowly*





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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:56 am

    OOS: I take it I'm approved.

    *Tim wakes up*

    Tim: Huh? What am I...

    *Tim gets out of the hospital bed*

    Tim: Oh, great.

    *Tim is still wearing his normal clothes and walks towards the exit, but is stopped by a nurse*

    Nurse: Excuse me. You need to answer a few questions.

    Tim: Fire away.

    Nurse: You will only leave once you feel able to, and once you have signed this document stating that we cannot be held responsible for any-

    Tim: Yeah, yeah. I accept. *Grabs quill and signs* That was a question?

    *The nurse gives him an annoyed look and leaves*

    *Tim steps through the doors and into the fresh air of the outside world*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Guest on Wed Mar 09, 2011 4:59 am

    Kazuki: YUMI! CUT THE VINES!

    *Vinemen comes closer, and Yumi is still struggling*

    OLD MAN! DISTRACT THEM WHILE I GET YUMI!

    *Throws his sword at the vine, cutting it, and catching Yumi*
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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Wed Mar 09, 2011 5:07 am

    [ Triken forest: ]

    *Old peculiar turns to the Vinemen*

    Old peculiar: I know your secret... You are resistant to fire...

    *Old peculiar takes a large medieval water rifle from the strap on his back*

    Old peculiar: The irony is... YOU HATE WATER!

    *The Vinemen all lunge for OP at the same time, but they are immediately pushed away by the impressively strong blast from the water rifle*

    Vineman: IT BURNS!!

    *Yumi opens her eyes, thinking she is about to be whipped with vines again, but realizes that she is in the arms of Kazuki*

    Yumi: Oh... Thank you~!

    *Yumi gives him a quick hug before jumping out of his arms and facing the Vinemen along with OP*

    *She takes one of them out with a accurate blast in the head from her sword*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Guest on Wed Mar 09, 2011 5:21 am

    Kazuki: Oh no. *His sword is stuck high in the tree stump.*
    Wait for me! I need to get my sword. *rapidly climbs the tree.*
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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Wed Mar 09, 2011 7:54 am

    [ Triken forest: ]

    *At the top of the tree, a Vineman has already taken Kazuki's sword and is now hissing at him, showing the thorn-like barbs on his wrists*

    Vineman: If you want your sword so much, kill me!

    *The vineman bares his green sharp teeth and lashes out with one of the barbs on his wrists*

    *Yumi thrusts her sword into the air, and another beam of light strikes down on it, a strange circle of light can be seen on the floor around her*

    Yumi: I just learned how to use buffs earlier~!

    Old peculiar: What does it do?

    Yumi: Speed increase.

    *Yumi dashes to one of the already soaked Vinemen and beheads it with a blindingly fast swipe of her sword, while Old peculiar pulls out a sort of medieval steampunk shotgun*

    Yumi: You have some freaking strange weapons old man!

    *Old peculiar fells the three remaining Vinemen with one blast of his shotgun*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Guest on Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:02 am

    Kazuki: *Jumps into the air and catches his sword and lands next to Yumi*

    How did you do that? you've got to show me!

    *Sheaths his sword*

    Now old man, where are we off to?
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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:20 am

    [ Trikan forest: ]

    Old peculiar: Well, we will be off to Ca-

    Yumi: Wait, you don't know how to use buffs!? Look at all those blessings you have on your freaking Armour!

    *She points to the poorly drawn prayers to the sun guardian on her skirt*

    Yumi: These are written in the language that the Guardians use to communicate to each other, we use it so the Guardians will notice we are trying to commmunicate with them... These don't actually work... I only had a few minutes to copy them from that sleeping Soul Knight that was on night watch, so the guardian just ignores them.

    *She points to the more perfectly done inscriptions all over her sword*

    Yumi: These are well done, because they were done by the people over at the base. The sun Guardian sees this and gives the asked power the object it is written on.

    *She attempts to read the inscriptions of Kazuki's armour*

    Yumi: I don't fully understand these... But I can see "endurance" and "strength" in there somewhere.

    *She points her sword into the air*

    Yumi: You activate the buff by thinking in your mind "Guardian!". Can you do that?

    *Old peculiar does a facepalm again and just waits for them to finish*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Guest on Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:35 am

    Kazuki: Okay...

    *Points his sword into the air and thinks guardian*
    *fails*
    *trys again*
    *Fails*
    *Repeats*

    I think it's faded. Hey can you read this?

    *Points to his left shoulder pad*

    I thought the inscriptions were gibberish, and thought of them as good luck charms. Can you read this one? he has never used it. Said it didn't need to be used until the "Darkness" arrives.
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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Zev the Reveler on Wed Mar 09, 2011 12:52 pm

    [ In the Hospital, 2 Weeks Ago: ]

    Sieg: *Coughs in his sleep*

    *In his nightmare, gigantic demons begin rising out of the earth and sea; beginning to devour the world...*

    Sieg: ... *Gives a long rasping noise, awakening* ... *Gaze flickers around*

    *As his long, forked tongue darts in and out periodically, he realizes with great anger he can't move*

    Sieg: ... *Huffs, laying back down* ...

    ...

    [ Four Days Ago: ]

    Sieg: ...You mean to tell me...I shall be exiled again...?

    Nurse: *In a bored voice* Yes. Now, if you'll come with me, it will be - !?

    *Shnk shnk*

    *Wielding two daggers snatched off a nightstand, Sieg hisses quietly*

    Sieg: ...My apologies. *Lunges*

    ...

    [ Trikan Forest: ]

    Sieg: ... *Flicks tongue out, then back in* ...

    *From the brush nearby, he gazes at the trio - Eyes narrowing at the mention of 'Guardians'*

    Sieg: ... *Gives a low hiss of feeling threatened* ... *Lashes out with arm*

    *Some kind of creature gives a choked squeak, as well as a snap*

    Sieg: *Lifts the newly-killed forest rat, jaws open wide...*

    *Mrnch*
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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:16 pm

    *Tim walks around Kenn, noticing a villager arguing with a Vineman*

    *Tim looks up at the mountain range in the distance and sees a light flashing on top of Cave Mountain*

    *Tim does not believe it at first, so he rubs his eyes and looks again, but sees another flash in the same place*

    Tim (thinking): Why are there flashes coming from Cave Mountain? Heck, I've got a lot of time to kill, I'll go and investigate.

    *Tim heads off towards Cave Mountain*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:21 pm

    [ Triken forest: ]

    *Yumi leans towards his shoulerpad, frowning for the first time*

    Yumi: I.. Don't actually know what that means...

    *She turns to Old peculiar*

    Yumi: Where are we going now?

    Old peculiar: Well, this other young traveler knows the way to the entrance from what I... Overheard... I know the way out of the forest, but you are going to have to lead us to the entrance of Cave Mountain.

    Yumi: Okay then~!

    *Yumi skips along, not realizing that Old peculiar is supposed to be leading the way*

    ...

    [ With Seig: ]

    *The Vinemen approach Seig*

    Vinmen: A lone traveler? This will be easy...

    *All of the three Vinemen attempt to slash at Seig's back*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Wed Mar 09, 2011 8:29 pm

    *Tim continues trekking towards the mountain range*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Wed Mar 16, 2011 4:40 am

    *Tim arrives at the bottom of the mountains*

    *Tim looks up and sees the light again*

    Tim: Hmm.

    *He starts to climb up*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Wed Mar 16, 2011 4:48 am

    *As Tim climbs up the mountain, the rocks around him start to shudder*

    ???: O... Ma... Haaaaa.....

    *The rocks come together to form three small rock elementals, each immediately going in to pulverise Tim with their heavy arms*

    *Meanwhile, a low whistling sound can be heard from the top of the mountain*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Wed Mar 16, 2011 4:54 am

    *Tim pulls out his sword, hears the whistle, and quickly looks up at the mountains*


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    Post by helo frens on Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:01 am

    *An arrow with an explosive strapped to it sticks deep into one of the three elementals heads*

    *The arrow explodes, completely shattering the elemental, killing it*

    ???: You should really be more careful.

    *Two more arrows destroy the remaining elementals and a silhouette can be seen at the top of the mountain*

    ???: Why are you here?


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Klak on Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:09 am

    I SHALL JOIN!!!

    Name: Rain Sulrai.
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    Epithet: The Unexpected Blade.
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    Race: Human.

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    Appearance: Medium height (not freakishly tall, but not short), jet black hair styled like an anime character. Skinny, yet with a Bruce Lee build. Often wears a black jumpsuit.

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    Affiliation: None yet.

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    Weapons: Several kunai daggers, a laser rifle, and a Longsword.

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    Backstory: Before he wound up at the Hospital, Rain was a warrior of the Alliance who knew too much for his own good. His habit of interrogating even his own friends made him a walking encyclopedia. He began to form some sort of conspiracy theory involving the Guardians, the Alliance, the Resistance, and several other factions across the world. Originally it was a secret, until he began telling some of his comrades. Soon, a movement formed that considered investigating this possible threat.

    However, the movement suddenly dispersed. Slowly, every member began to disappear. Rain knew that someone did not like what was going on, and that they would find him soon. Before he could form an escape plan, however, he was attacked by an unknown enemy.

    It seems that a traveller had found him lying near death after the attack, and took him to the hospital. Sadly, Rain cannot remember anything, except his name, his skills, and a strange name:
    "Quinze."
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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Wed Mar 16, 2011 5:12 am

    Tim: Forgive me... I did not know anyone lived in these mountains. My curiosity was aroused when I saw a bright light emanating from one of the caves. I suppose I should be more grateful... you probably just saved my life.


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Wed Mar 16, 2011 8:24 pm

    *A man in red leather armour comes down form the top of the mountain and comes into focus*

    *He is an infected (A human with pointed ears and what looks like tatoos all over his arm, but absense of arms, leaving just a shell of tatoos in the shape of arms connecting his hands to his shoulders) with dark purple windswept hair and a ivory bow slung across his back.*

    ???: Don't talk for long now, the guardians don't seem happy with us...

    *He glances at Tim's glowing sword*

    ???: And I think that might be the problem...


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Klak on Thu Mar 17, 2011 5:57 am

    *Rain Sulrai wakes up on a hospital bed*

    *the room is typical, with a nurse on the far left corner*

    *he gets up, and widens his eyes*

    Rain: "I remember....nothing....I am Rain....but...what the bloody heck happened?"

    (I'll let someone else take the nurse)



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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Thu Mar 17, 2011 6:04 am

    Nurse: Hello~!

    *The nurse looks suspiciously like nurse joy, but with her pink hair in more of a Sakura style*

    Nurse: We don't know exactly what happened, but we do know that you were in a critical condition when you were brought here.

    *She approaches slowly, taking a thermometer from behind her ear*

    Nurse: Take this.

    *She gently puts the thermometer into Rain's mouth, smiling slightly*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Klak on Thu Mar 17, 2011 6:18 am

    *Rain keeps the thermometer in his mouth, but looks suspiciously at the nurse*

    Rain: *thinking* "I had better get out of here.....whatever caused this critical condition might come back for me and finish the job...Escaping through the door will be expected. There has to be a window or something....

    *looks at the window*

    Rain: "Got it. I'll break through the window. But I should let the nurse run some more tests. I must be of good health before I go out into the world."


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Thu Mar 17, 2011 6:39 am

    *The nurse takes the thermometer, looks at it briefly, then throws it behind her lazily, it hitting the will with a crash*

    Nurse: You're fine.

    *She rolls her eyes and walks over to the door, opening it and gesturing for Rain to get out*

    Nurse: You've made an excellent recovery.

    *Rain blinks, and strangely, a girl with black hair and a leather jacket can be seen where the nurse once was, he blinks again, and the girl is replaced with the nurse again*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Klak on Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:00 am

    Rain: "R-right...erm...what was your name again?"

    *he looks around. There had to be a weapon somewhere. Judging by the clothes he was still wearing, he must have been a warrior in his past life.*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:10 am

    *The nurse keeps on changing between blinks*

    Nurse: My name? My name is Ni-ni. What's yours?

    *Rain's previous weapons are on the side table next to him*

    *Ni-Ni sighs and looks at Rain impatiently*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Klak on Thu Mar 17, 2011 9:54 am

    *Rain gets up, with some effort, and begins to equip himself with his weapons*

    Rain: "Ni-ni....if only I could remember...I'm sure I've heard that name before. Who are you...really?"


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Thu Mar 17, 2011 7:33 pm

    *Ni-Ni walks up to Rain, the difference in their height revealed as Ni-Ni being much shorter than him*

    Ni-Ni: You want to know who I am really? Well...

    *Ni-Ni stops changing, and stays as the nurse form*

    *She giggles and pulls off her disguise, she is revealed to have blue short hair, and two strange black dots under her left eye, she seems to be wearing shorts, then a short skirt over that, she is wearing a dark blue sleeveless jacket and a black sleeveless shirt*

    Ni-Ni: I... I can change between two forms... Can I travel with you...?


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:16 pm

    *Tim looks at his sword as if it were a person he's angry with*

    Tim: I knew there was something strange about this sword...


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Thu Mar 17, 2011 8:24 pm

    ???: Well, whatever it is, we need to bless it.

    *He looks at the sword further, almost inspecting it*

    ???: There should be a blessed pedestal in the summit. Let's go.

    *He begins to lead Tim up the mountain*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:24 am

    *Tim looks strangely at his sword again and follows ??? up the mountain*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:35 am

    *??? looks behind his shoulder as he digs his foot into a crevice in the rock*

    ???: Are you familiar with the guardians?

    *He stays strong at his perch on the side of the mountain, and waits for a responce with a slight smile*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:37 am

    Tim: I've only heard the stories, like most people. I've never actually met any.


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:43 am

    ???: Well, if we don't get that thing blessed quickly, you willsee a guardian...

    *He begins climbing up the mountain again with ease, his tatoo arms and hands proving extremely strong*

    ???: ...But chances are he is not going to be very happy with you.


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Kon on Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:46 am

    *Tim looks worried as he climbs after ???, and he smashes a rock with his sword*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Klak on Fri Mar 18, 2011 2:15 pm

    *Rain nods, and begins to walk out the door*

    Rain: "It will be a dangerous journey. Everything I once knew about this world is gone. Or at least, most of is. You will be my guide. However, remember I'm paranoid. If I ever feel that those fancy weapons you carry are going to end up in my back, I will invent a way to kill you. Judging by how many weapons I've been carrying, I must have been a fighter, or a soldier of some sort, so the action will be simple. Now, we should first leave this wretched hospital. Any idea where I could go?"


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:14 pm

    *Ni-Ni pauses for a moment*

    Ni-Ni: You think you can kill us?

    *She bursts out laughing, the pitch of her laughter changing as she switches to her other form*

    Ni-Ni: Oh, that's cute... Anyway, if we are going to make any progress, we need to get off this island.

    *She giggles and pulls out a map, showing it to Rain with difficulty because of their hight difference*

    Ni-Ni: We need to end uuuuuuuup, here.

    *She points to Nharvarda*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Klak on Sat Mar 19, 2011 4:45 pm

    *Rain does not smile, nor change expression*

    Rain: "I can kill whatever I damn well please. And the journey will be long. We'll have to find a transport as soon as we get to the shore of this place. Follow me."

    *he begins to walk down the hallway*


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Tue Mar 22, 2011 6:52 pm

    *Ni-Ni struggles to keep up with walking, and skips in front of Rain to show him the map again*

    Ni-Ni: We can steal some boats from this dock-

    *She points to a boat logo on the shoreline of Triken*

    Ni-Ni: We can easily take it from them, I mean, they have almost no defenses whatsoever.

    *She goes back to following Rain and giggles*

    Ni-Ni: *Changes to her blue haired form* Ever heard of Archyura?


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by Klak on Wed Mar 23, 2011 8:16 am

    Rain: *he nods, agreeing with that idea* "Archyura....there's something about that name that nags me...I just don't know what....is he a Guardian?"


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    Re: Subnixus - The changing planet

    Post by helo frens on Wed Mar 23, 2011 8:25 am

    *Ni-Ni giggles again*

    Ni-Ni: Yes he is~! Guardian of the seas!

    *She brings out what seems to be a charm made of ivory out of her pocket*

    Ni-Ni: This is what my daddy won for challenging him.

    *She puts it back in her pocket, looking at the vast sea on the map*

    Ni-Ni: You know, Archyura is the Guardian of challenge and water, but he is also the Guardian of morality...

    *She gulps*

    Ni-Ni: I've only seen him once, but that was when I was very small.

    *She looks up at rain*


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