Constructive Character Criticism

...Alright.

I just had this idea...And I'm waiting for everybody to begin despising it.

In this thread, we'll each present one character of ours at a time for critiques; personality, history, abilities, all o' that. There'll be all sorts of ways to do it, just so long as...

1. No Flaming, Bashing, etc., etc. Don't Be A Jerk, Because I Know All Of Us Can Avoid It.
2. Keep Focused On The Point Of The Thread; Try To Keep It To Currently-Active/Known Characters.
3. The Invisible Rule - If It's Not A Rule, But Should Be A Rule, Consider It A Rule.

First, I shall present, for the consideration of BZPB's Populace...Namah.

Note: Namah & DreamKeepers are Property of David & Liz Lillie.

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*The camera focuses on Namah, sitting in a large beanbag chair*

Namah: Okay. Zev bought me a few boxes of Ferrero Rocher, so I'll sit down for this "critique" nonsense.

*She yawns boredly*

Um, I just joined, so would I be able to do it?

I dont really know anything about Namah enough to critsize.
I would like to present Shika for evaluation

Thanks for reviving this topic, Michael. I forgot about it, and I think it was a good idea.

Namah is quite a cool character. Her dark humor is pretty refreshing, I guess. I don't remember much of her powers, honestly.

Not sure what to say about Shika, so I might edit this...

I would like to present Klak for evaluation, as well, (three characters at once, HOW WUNDERBAR)!

Well, with me doing personality tampering lately, what does the forum think of Sasuken?

I really like Sasuken!

It's cool to see how he's matured and grown in strength over the course of the RPG!

Something's just so fun about how he's really grown into his role as Ynot's right-hand man.

Now, if I may, I would like to present a new character for evaluation:

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*The scene is Vriska's RESPITEBLOCK - Somehow.*

Vriska: *DAT HAIRFLIP* Welcome, 8oys and girls!!!!!!!! It's gr8 to be included in the legendary legions of 8ZPower 8attles characters! Please, give the Head Honcho slash Stooge your opinions on my 8l8ant intentions to make up for characters like the Fresh Prince of Fresh Fruit. Guys like that are the most worthless lame to sh!t the dum8ass 8ed.

*Plopping into her computer chair and spinning it around, Vriska gives a sultry stare*

Vriska: Go on. I'm w8ing.

[ABSCOND]
[ABJURE]
[ABSTAIN]
[AGGRIEVE]
[SLOPPY HATRED MAKE-OUTS]
[FLUMMERY]