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    The Legacy of Yon

    Post by Kon on Sun Feb 27, 2011 3:40 am

    The Legacy of Yon

    Chapter 1


    164 years ago, it was springtime on the planet of the Terugans. The treeforms were in blossom and the children were playing among them. However, not all of the children liked to play innocent games like Catch the Gronoes. Some of them, like Yon, spent their time stealing parts from vehicles and hiding them from the adults.
    Yon was three years old when he first took up this hobby, and he was much taller than his friends. Sometimes he would go out with them part-stealing late at night, leaving his parents continually concerned for his safety. Not that he cared what his parents thought; he considered them worthless, nagging lifeforms.
    As a result of his parents being too timid to tell him to stop stealing the parts off of other people's machines, Yon continued this behavior through to adulthood.


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    Re: The Legacy of Yon

    Post by Kon on Fri Mar 18, 2011 2:18 am

    Chapter 2

    Now one day Yon, in his twenties now, was taking a stroll around the Terugan government headquarters. He had heard that Vok, the newly appointed Terugan President, had ordered his men to get rid of lots of old plasma drives from old patrol ships. Yon was particularly interested in getting his hands on the plasma drives, as they are very useful for powering ships and weapons. Apparently Vok wanted to replace them with energy recycler drives.
    Yon had arranged for his friends to meet with him at this position, but so far they were nowhere to be seen...


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    Re: The Legacy of Yon

    Post by helo frens on Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:38 am

    I love how no-one has commented on this.


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    Re: The Legacy of Yon

    Post by Klak on Fri Mar 25, 2011 10:18 am

    You've got a very interesting story commencing here, KoN. Keep it up Smile


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    Re: The Legacy of Yon

    Post by Heat on Thu Apr 07, 2011 2:07 am

    Meta-Shroom wrote:I love how no-one has commented on this.

    Ha, now your statement is false!


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    Re: The Legacy of Yon

    Post by Kon on Thu Apr 07, 2011 3:30 am

    Chapter 3

    There was a loud crash, and two Terugans came stumbling around the corner into Yon's sight. One of them wore a visor and another one a party hat.
    "Where have you two been? You're putting the whole plan in jeopardy!" Yon shouted, annoyed that they had only just arrived.
    "Uh, sorry..." replied the guy with the visor. "I spent most of the time trying to get Daj to come. He seems to be in some kind of trance."
    "Uhhh..." moaned Daj.
    "Ugh. Anyway, see the vent shaft up there?" replied Yon.
    "Yep."
    "We're going to have to get in it. Once that's done, we'll have to crawl to the dump chamber, and"
    "BUUUUUURRRRP"
    "That's it."
    Yon then kicks Daj very hard in the stomach, sending him flying backwards into a chair.
    "Are you still with me, Wuk? I hope you can still see through that visor."
    "Obviously."

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    I have a feeling that this would be better as a comedy than an epic.


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    Re: The Legacy of Yon

    Post by Heat on Thu Apr 07, 2011 3:32 am

    I agree.


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    Re: The Legacy of Yon

    Post by Klak on Wed Jun 06, 2012 3:01 pm

    Yes, a wonderful Terugan comedy full of SCIENCE humor.


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